crit response.

The response i got from my ideas was very positive, only a couple of improvements which could be made to make them clearer;

-try to keep the style of drawing consistant throughout the animation to keep it clearer.

-add a alley down the concept of a bowling ball to show perspective when the ball is rolling down the screen to knock out the word collide.

Other than that i was very happy with the crit, it just seemed at that point that some of my ideas were very technical and would not convert when trying to produce them on after effects with my very basic skills so i would probably have to simplify some of them quite dramatically.