what is good presentation.

the first thing we did after coming back from summer and our extensive research into our good is pitch our good to the class in a 5 minute presentation, showing what your good is, why you think it is good aswel as facts and figures about the good. Here is the presentation i created summarizing the research i conducted,

This was to help come up with initial concepts on how to tackle the what is good brief, after conducting research into minimalism i was really into minimalist publishing and editorials and wanted to focus my outcome on this somehow. The idea i had was to produce a minimalist editorial all about minimalism, focussing on the minimalist layout of the book, educating people on what minimalism was, where it originated and influences on minimalism. Showing some of my own minimalist designs aswel as analysations of others works.


Feedback from crit; things to look at.

How good?.. were you convinced.


What else interesting about their good that hasnt been mentioned?
-what message do you want to get across.
-how minimal you could make something and it still be legible.


Is there a flaw in the argument? what do you disagree with and why?
-be more specific? what is it about minimalism that you think is good.


What processes, scenarious, or contects might improve the potential impact of the concept?
-maybe look at certain countries - places that arnt too well known.
-look at signage.
-publications, what the book could be about? could be completely random as long as it is the editorial is crisp and minimal.


How else might the concept be creatively improved? any other comments...
-some of your own minimalst deisng work.