Wednesday, 25 May 2011

speaking from experience - final crit

these are the finished cards which i took to my crit, each printed with the back on.








the crit didnt go too well really, they didnt really seem to understand the concept behind them saying that it is a genuin problem however it doesnt necessarily resolve the problem its just a humorous response with mainly impossible problems.
They also outlines a few spelling errors and to re-word the back of the cards because it didnt make sense,  some of the type is a different colour to the stop and also some of the type was too small and difficult to read.
also the cash for gold illustration cropped up again, saying the colour scheme didnt work and fit with the other illustrations, so i guess i should change it..

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